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Agni KaiAgni KaiHe walked into the arena with poise and confidence. His head was carried high with his jet black ponytail trailing behind him."That old general doesn't know what he's up against," he thought to himself. He strode to the entrance of the arena with the traditional agni kai robe on his muscular back and knelt down, ready and anticipating the old General Bujing whom he'd disrespected the other day. As he stood up tall to face his enemy, his eyes grew wide and he began to sweat. His muscles grew tense as his stomach turned into knots. Never before had he anticipated this. The people in the audience were cheering, wanting the fight to start but it just wouldn't. The young boy cried out in fear,"Please father, I only had the Fire Nation's best interest at heart, I'M SORRY I SPOKE OUT OF TURN."The monstrous man in front of him paced towards the shaking boy as if he was trying to intimidate him."You will fight for your honor," he boomed."I meant you know disrespect, I am your loya